Tuesday 28 March 2017

Filling Buckets


Felix is building blocks and his sister Emily wants to play. But Emily was never careful and the tower always fell down when she played.

Please can I play Felix? I’ll be really careful. But Felix didn’t trust her. No you always knocks my stowers
down.

But I’ll be super careful.
No, no, no!

Emily got angry and smashed his tower.
Grandad moaned Felix, she’s being such a meanie.

Felix you have just emptied your sister’s bucket. Said Grandad.
He went on to explain….
Everyone has a bucket above their head. When you are mean the bucket gets empty but when you are kind to your sister then her bucket gets filled
And then she was be nice and then she will never be mean again and she doesn't know that you have the best friends.

Then Feliz decided that his sister can build the tower with him again.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Malachi,
    That was really good! But you need to remember to pt some speech marks in your sentences when someone is talking.

    From Kim :)

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  2. hi malachi.
    great writing very it was long and nice
    maxwell.

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